This week, I got the final round of feedback from George. He pointed out a few important improvements—mostly around the clarity of camera framing and the timing of specific shots.
I made those changes and then went through the entire previs in Premiere Pro to tighten up the edits and make sure it flowed smoothly. Once I was happy with the pacing and emotion of the sequence, I rendered the final version and submitted it.
Here is my final submission: